Red Pearls
Here
red pearls
on a vine
once treasures from
South America
now riches of glowing
fire engine red - bright orbs
beckoning to be gently plucked
their pungent aroma and sweet taste
bringing my father's garden back to life
An Etheree poem
has 10 lines
of 55 syllables
beginning with one syllable
and building with the addition
of one syllable each line
to a total of 10 syllables
*
Thanks for introducing me to a new form poem. Enjoyed the subject, too.
ReplyDeleteYour "Father's garden back to life"...touched me, Delwyn.
ReplyDeleteMy sister has been keeping my father's garden going 30 years now, after his passing.
...Wanda
Lucious. Love the phrase, 'my Father's garden' - it can encompass so much ...
ReplyDeleteMy father grew roses. When he died and then my mother, my sister moved into the house. Eventually they moved, sold the beach house but not before she dug up Dad's roses which now grow at her new house.
ReplyDeleteLove the little poem. And the tomatoes! We got gallons of cherry tomatoes off our plants.
Yummm....looks great!!I love cherry tomatoes!! its a pity I could not do much on my balcony this year,mostly I have them in pots! Lovely post Delwyn,happy days!!
ReplyDeleteDelightfully clever, and a fine way to remember your father's garden.
ReplyDeleteJust lovely! A fine Etheree, Delwyn. I love the turn at the end to bringing the tomatoes into the emotional/mental realm.
ReplyDeleteThat turning reminds me of Tanka poems.
I love that poem, which must have taken you forever to compose - a fit tribute to your Father whose memory lives on through each sense that is engaged when you think of those tomatoes. Are you still in Australia?
ReplyDeleteSuch precision in word choice. And they do look like pearls, lustre and all.
ReplyDeleteDelwyn, always enjoy stopping by to see what your creativity and spirituality will come up with next. Love it all
ReplyDeleteWell you know I am going to naturally pick that last phrase... bringing my father's garden back to life... but I also love the title... red pearls is perfect.
ReplyDeleteHi Vicky
ReplyDeleteI have been holding you in my thoughts...
Barb
I compose while I walk...counting the syllables on my fingers...I wonder sometimes if other walkers think I have autism or some other problem as I wriggle my fingers about...Yes we are in Australia for another few weeks yet...I am off to NZ for a week next week ...brrrrrrr
The word verif below is winturil...I imagine it is going to feel very winturil in ChCH...
Happy days
Red pearls should be the name of a new cherry or grape tomato. Your photos make me hungry for a BLT using fresh off the vine tomatoes, but unfortunately it's too late in the season.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you like to write these poems... I could never keep track of the numbers.
lovely post, Delwyn, and I can almost TASTE these luscious tomatoes.
ReplyDeleteN xoxoxox
Oh, those look so lush they barely look real...
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting verse form--syllablic poetry can be quite fun to write. Re: your comment about counting syllables while walking: when I lived in Virginia in the 80s, I wrote a lot of syllabic poetry at one point & used to wonder almost exactly the same thing!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful red pearls!
ReplyDeleteYum, yum, yum!! Nothing much beats home grown tomatoes! Delicious photos and awesome poem!
ReplyDeleteincredible poem-- it would have taken me forever to try and write on with these syllable rules-- so good thing I can enjoy yours.
ReplyDeleteMakes my mouth water.
ReplyDeleteHello Delwyn
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem and the red pearls are beautiful.
Have a good week-end!
Best
Tracy
poem and pictures a real treat. As would be sampling their subject.
ReplyDeleteTuck In !
hi delwyn - nice writing and tasty pictures of little tasty treats. steven
ReplyDeleteI love your blog. It is filled with beautiful pictures.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post! Pictures and poem, both.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, 'My father's garden.' Oh my heart.
Interesting poetic style. I have not seen that before now. Beautiful red pearls you have there!
ReplyDeletelovely and tasty. glad the garden is still going forward
ReplyDeleteThanks for the explanation - I couldn't wait to have a go! I've just written my firsthere
ReplyDeleteI get excited just seeing the pictures! Tomatoes my favorite food on the planet! I came to the conclusion the other day, is their any meal or items that tomatoes DO NOT go with???
ReplyDeleteI couldn't think of a one.
Awesome abilities here in your write, no doubt a huge fan of a poem on one of my favorite delights!